Talk:Second Patagonian War

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Very interesting! But is this a WIP or a Proposal? Zahir 00:31, 24 May 2007 (PDT)

Thanks. This is a proposal that is work in progress now. That is the main ideas are proposed, but I might be changing some (more or less minor) details here and there for now and perhaps will add some more information. As well I have invited people who are caretakers of some countries to tell how their countries would have reacted to this event and this would be incorporated in the article. Abdul-aziz 03:02, 24 May 2007 (PDT)

I've made some edits, for the purpose of readability. I'll admit to having a feeling that events as described seem a bit "rushed" IMHO. Perhaps if more were made of the actual guerillas--who were/are they? Did they get actual help from that Anti-Rios governments? Was there a particularly infamous one? Zahir 11:23, 26 May 2007 (PDT)

Very good! Wonder how it was the First Patagonian War.--Pedromoderno 17:35, 26 May 2007 (PDT)

Thank you for editing and comments. English is not my native language so my texts are not always the best and Lithuanian language usually uses longer sentences. A note would be however that Araucania and Patagonia is a single country, so probably words like "both" or "they" shouldn't be used when speaking about it. Ok, I will write more about the Free Riu movements. This war is loosely based on the Lebanon war last summer (although many things, including the outcome, are different). Regarding the First Patagonian War, I assume it would be the war when New Hellenicia, with the help from Araucania and Patagonia, became independent from Riu de L'Argent (these events are briefly mentioned in some places). Abdul-aziz 02:30, 27 May 2007 (PDT)

Thankee! (And for fixing the Wars of American Territory too) Zahir 07:56, 27 May 2007 (PDT)
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